The steps of the opening two minutes

In this post I will be going through the opening two minutes, how we improved our targets set, and how we believe it turned out better:

Here we improved our titles, and added actors, turning into this:
According to my colleague, our editing software would not allow us to upload our final version, which included the director name, producer, editor and actor names. This let us down as we potentially could of achieved a higher grade than we can without the final version.